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I believe that college life is a new life after graduation from high school and absolutely different with high school.
I had experienced a deep education for chemical engineering what I like so much and properly free and guarded life in the university.
I think university student is like a person between youth and adults.
However, I think the cost of college is too high if we want to just have experience.
But, the cost of a semester of a private university is over 4,000 dollars in Korea.
If the major is the medical or art departments, the cost will be increased.
In Korea, the government offers compulsory education for elementary and middle schools.
However, now almost all students who are over 90% enter university.
Many students go to university with student loans from the government.
It means they become debtors even they were students and they start to pay back money after getting a job.
So, I think this education culture should be changed as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! As always, thank you for taking time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
You gave good thoughts on this one. Indeed, it is important to have a degree to give you an edge in life, but I think in today\'s world, skill and experience are the most important. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I believe that college life is a new life after graduation from high school and absolutely different with high school.
>>CORRECT
I had experienced a deep education for chemical engineering what I like so much and properly free and guarded life in the university.
I had experienced a deep education for chemical engineering what I like so much and properly free and guarded life in the university.
>>I had a very extensive education and understanding of chemical engineering which I like so much and I experienced a care free but guarded life in the university.
I think university student is like a person between youth and adults.
I think university student is like a person between youth and adults.
>>I think a university student is like a person between being a youth and an adult.
However, I think the cost of college is too high if we want to just have experience.
However, I think the cost of college is too high if we want to just have experience.
>>CORRECT
But, the cost of a semester of a private university is over 4,000 dollars in Korea.
But, the cost of a semester of a private university is over 4,000 dollars in Korea.
>>CORRECT
If the major is the medical or art departments, the cost will be increased.
If the major is the medical or art departments, the cost will be increased.
>>If the major is the medical or art departments, the cost will be higher.
In Korea, the government offers compulsory education for elementary and middle schools.
In Korea, the government offers compulsory education for elementary and middle schools.
>>CORRECT
However, now almost all students who are over 90% enter university.
However, now almost all students who are over 90% enter university.
>>However, 90 percent of the students population go to the university.
Many students go to university with student loans from the government.
Many students go to university with student loans from the government.
>>Many students go to universities with student loans from the government.
It means they become debtors even they were students and they start to pay back money after getting a job.
It means they become debtors even they were students and they start to pay back money after getting a job.
>>CORRECT
So, I think this education culture should be changed as soon as possible.
So, I think this education culture should be changed as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT
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