12/20
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, there! T.Alice!!
It's a beginning day of the new week.
I'm at the motel in Ulsan.
As you know, I came to this city for ship's inspection.
I did my best. And I am enjoying my time alone. Haha..
I talked about the game I enjoyed yesterday too much.. ㅡㅡ ;;
Please check my homework.
B. She is taking fewer classes this semester.
A. That student is always late for class. He annoys the teacher.
A. That food has a lot of sugars.
A. Every students was on time for class this morning.
A. This news is very exciting.
This motel is too big for me.. ㅡㅡ;; But I had no choice.
Because there isn't a small room.
Do you have any experiance that you were registered at a motel or
hotel alone?
In case of me, I should stay at the motel for ship's inspection frequently.
See you!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
I finally finished checking. Haha!
Anyway, there are few corrections for your homework. Please go over them. Explanations are provided in each missed item. :)
Have a great night Sir [이름]! :) Thanks for today\'s awesome class!
~Teacher Alice
Hi, there! T.Alice!!
>> Hi there T. Alice!
>> Hi there Teacher Alice!It\'s a beginning day of the new week.
>> It\'s the beginning of a new week. I\'m at the motel in Ulsan.
>> Correct!As you know, I came to this city for ship\'s inspection.
>> As you know, I came to this city for the ship\'s inspection. I did my best.
>> Correct!
And I am enjoying my time alone. Haha..
>> Correct! I talked about the game I enjoyed yesterday too much.. ㅡㅡ ;;
>> Yesterday, I enjoyed playing the game I talked about last time.
>> I enjoyed playing the game yesterday. It\'s the one I talked about last time.Please check my homework.>> Correct! B. She is taking fewer classes this semester.
>> Correct! A. That student is always late for class. He annoys the teacher.
>> Correct! A. That food has a lot of sugars.
>> B. That food has a lot of sugar. *Sugar is uncountable. Meaning, we cannot count sugar. No word as \'sugars\'. A. Every students was on time for class this morning.
>> B. Every student was on time for class this morning. * Every is an adjective referring to only one.
A. This news is very exciting.>> Correct! This motel is too big for me.. ㅡㅡ;; But I had no choice.
>> Correct! Because there isn\'t a small room.
>> Correct! Do you have any experiance that you were registered at a motel or hotel alone?
>> Do you have any experinece booking a hotel or motel room alone? **Yes, I already had! Hihi! In case of me, I should stay at the motel for ship\'s inspection frequently.
>> In my case, Ishould stay in the motel frequently for the ship\'s inspection. See you!!
>> Correct!
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