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2013-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi, there! T.Alice!! It's a beginning day of the new week. I'm at the motel in Ulsan. As you know, I came to this city for ship's inspection. I did my best. And I am enjoying my time alone. Haha.. I talked about the game I enjoyed yesterday too much.. ㅡㅡ ;; Please check my homework. B. She is taking fewer classes this semester. A. That student is always late for class. He annoys the teacher. A. That food has a lot of sugars. A. Every students was on time for class this morning. A. This news is very exciting. This motel is too big for me.. ㅡㅡ;; But I had no choice. Because there isn't a small room. Do you have any experiance that you were registered at a motel or hotel alone? In case of me, I should stay at the motel for ship's inspection frequently. See you!!

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Hello Sir [이름]! I finally finished checking. Haha! Anyway, there are few corrections for your homework. Please go over them. Explanations are provided in each missed item. :) Have a great night Sir [이름]! :) Thanks for today\'s awesome class! ~Teacher Alice  Hi, there! T.Alice!! >> Hi there T. Alice! >> Hi there Teacher Alice!It\'s a beginning day of the new week. >> It\'s the beginning of a new week. I\'m at the motel in Ulsan. >> Correct!As you know, I came to this city for ship\'s inspection. >> As you know, I came to this city for the ship\'s inspection. I did my best. >> Correct! And I am enjoying my time alone. Haha.. >> Correct! I talked about the game I enjoyed yesterday too much.. ㅡㅡ ;; >> Yesterday, I enjoyed playing the game I talked about last time. >> I enjoyed playing the game yesterday. It\'s the one I talked about last time.Please check my homework.>> Correct! B. She is taking fewer classes this semester. >> Correct!  A. That student is always late for class. He annoys the teacher. >> Correct! A. That food has a lot of sugars. >> B. That food has a lot of sugar. *Sugar is uncountable. Meaning, we cannot count sugar. No word as \'sugars\'. A. Every students was on time for class this morning. >> B. Every student was on time for class this morning. * Every is an adjective referring to only one. A. This news is very exciting.>> Correct! This motel is too big for me.. ㅡㅡ;; But I had no choice. >> Correct! Because there isn\'t a small room. >> Correct! Do you have any experiance that you were registered at a motel or hotel alone? >> Do you have any experinece booking a hotel or motel room alone? **Yes, I already had! Hihi! In case of me, I should stay at the motel for ship\'s inspection frequently. >> In my case, Ishould stay in the motel frequently for the ship\'s inspection. See you!! >> Correct!

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