12. 20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences nopt more than 8.
Question: Do schools, temples or churches have special programs for this holiday in your country?
In schools, there's "teacher's day(5/15)". On that day, students sing a speicial song for teachers. The song is for expressing thanks to teachers.
In temples, there's "Buddha's birthday(5/3)". On that day, people hang and fly paper lanterns. This work is for celebrating Buddha's birthday and wishing good luck.
In churches, there's "Easter(4/16)" and "Christmas(12/25)". On "Easter" day, people devide Easter eggs to celebrate the God's revival. On Christmas, people make christmas trees, and give childeren or lovers gifts for expressing their love. Christmas is a day for celebrating the God's birthday, but many people think it's a good day to date with lovers or families.
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>>In Korean schools, they celebrate Teacher\'s Day every May 5.
On that day, students sing a speicial song for teachers.
>> On this day, students sing a special song for their teachers.
The song is for expressing thanks to teachers.
>> The song is being sang by the students to express their gratitude to their teachers.
In temples, there\'s \"Buddha\'s birthday(5/3)\".
In temples, there\'s \"Buddha\'s birthday(5/3)\".
>> In Korean temples, they celebrate Buddha\'s birthday every May 3.
On that day, people hang and fly paper lanterns.
>> On this day, people hang and fly paper lanterns.
This work is for celebrating Buddha\'s birthday and wishing good luck.
>> This is to celebrate Buddha\'s birthday and to wish him good luck.
In churches, there\'s \"Easter(4/16)\" and \"Christmas(12/25)\".
In churches, there\'s \"Easter(4/16)\" and \"Christmas(12/25)\".
>> In Korean churches, they also celebrate Easter every March 16 and Christmas every December 25.
On \"Easter\" day, people devide Easter eggs to celebrate the God\'s revival.
>> On Easter\'s day, people will break Easter eggs to celebrate God\'s revival.
On Christmas, people make christmas trees, and give childeren or lovers gifts for expressing their love.
>> On Christmas day, people make Christmas trees and give gifts to children and to their lovers to express their love.
Christmas is a day for celebrating the God\'s birthday, but many people think it\'s a good day to date with lovers or families.
>> Christmas is a day to celebrate Jesus Christ birthday but many people think that it is a good day to date lovers or families.
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