12/20 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I remember one restaurant when I checked this homework.
When I lived in Japan, I have been often visited a curry restaurant near my office.
The owner was Indian couple, they served Indian style curry with cheese naan.
When I went there, always they recognized me and smiled at me.
The taste of curry was perfect and I think maybe I like there because the owner was also a foreigner like me.
I have been there about three times per week with my colleagues.
After moving to Jeju, my favorite restaurant is the Jeju style dish restaurant near my school.
Jeju is Korea\'s popular tourist city.
So, there are a lot of expensive restaurants to target tourists.
But, my favorite restaurant serves Jeju style modern foods in one table, and the price is very reasonable.
So, when I meet my guest in Jeju, I always serve a meal in there.
In order to find a good restaurant, not only taste but also atmosphere and kindness are also very important.
My hobby is making a map for good restaurants and cafes in Jeju.
강사 첨삭
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Here are the corrections.
I remember one restaurant when I checked this homework. When I lived in Japan, I have been often visited a curry restaurant near my office.
>>> Correct!
The owner was Indian couple, they served Indian style curry with cheese naan. When I went there, always they recognized me and smiled at me.
>>> Correct!
The taste of curry was perfect and I think maybe I like there because the owner was also a foreigner like me. I have been there about three times per week with my colleagues.
>>> The taste of the curry was perfect and I think, maybe I like there because the owner was also a foreigner like me. I have been there about thrice a week with my colleagues.
After moving to Jeju, my favorite restaurant is the Jeju style dish restaurant near my school. Jeju is Korea\'s popular tourist city.
>>> Correct!
So, there are a lot of expensive restaurants to target tourists. But, my favorite restaurant serves Jeju style modern foods in one table, and the price is very reasonable.
>>> Correct!
So, when I meet my guest in Jeju, I always serve a meal in there. In order to find a good restaurant, not only taste but also atmosphere and kindness are also very important.
>>> So, when I meet my guest in Jeju, I always serve them a meal there. In order to find a good restaurant, I consider not only the taste, but also the atmosphere and kindness are also very important.
My hobby is making a map for good restaurants and cafes in Jeju.
>>> My hobby is making a map of good restaurants and cafes in Jeju.
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