12.21.2023 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I have played “공기놀이(gonggi game)”. It is korea’s folk game. I had learned win and lose through this game. It uses five small stones. we throw stones and catch them again. I think… it’s rule is complex so I can’t explain it… But It was very fun. So I’m sure that foreigners will like this game😁 It was my favorite korea’s traditional game!
p.s. Actually I didn’t know where to submit my homework, so I couldn’t do homework. Finally i find this bulletin board!! I can do homework from today!
강사 첨삭
Hi So [이름]!^^
Andrea
p.s. Actually I didn’t know where to submit my homework, so I couldn’t do homework.
Finally! I can read your answers.
I am looking forward to check your homework!
Andrea
I have played “공기놀이(gonggi game)”.
>> Correct
It is korea’s folk game.
>> It\'s a Korean folk game.
I had learned win and lose through this game.
>> I had learned how to win and lose through this game.
It uses five small stones.
>> Correct
we throw stones and catch them again.
>> We throw the stones and catch them again.
I think… it’s rule is complex so I can’t explain it…
>> I think the rule is complicated, I can\'t explain it well.
But It was very fun.
>> Correct
So I’m sure that foreigners will like this game😁 3
>> So I’m sure that foreigners will like this game.
It was my favorite korea’s traditional game!
>> It is my favorite Korean traditional game.
p.s. Actually I didn’t know where to submit my homework, so I couldn’t do homework.
>> P.S: Actually, I didn\'t know where to submit my homework so I couldn\'t do my homework.
Finally i find this bulletin board!! I can do homework from today!
>> Finally, I found the bulletin board so I can do my homework starting today.
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