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2018-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> What behaviors are deemed as appropriate for men but inappropriate for women? We are living in the after post-modernism age. The lesson of post-modernism was, in an one word, diversity. All of people have the right that can\'t be discriminated by race, gender, handicap, personal background and so on. There are no behaviors that their appropriacy is judged by gender. (Actually, the idea of post-modernism has a huge contradiction. I hope that someday we will have a conversation about this one)

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

>> What behaviors are deemed as appropriate for men but inappropriate for women?

We are living in the after post-modernism age.
>> correct

The lesson of post-modernism was, in an one word, diversity.
>> The lesson of post-modernism was, in one word, diversity.

All of people have the right that can\'t be discriminated by race, gender, handicap, personal background and so on.
>> All people have the right not to be discriminated due to race, gender, handicap, personal background, and so.

There are no behaviors that their appropriacy is judged by gender.
>> The appropriateness of behaviors shouldn\'t be judged based on gender.

(Actually, the idea of post-modernism has a huge contradiction. I hope that someday we will have a conversation about this one)
>> Let\'s schedule a day for this topic!^^

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