12/21 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How do you like to spend your free time?
<Answer>I read books, I watch TV, and I play wth my friends.
2. If you had more free time, what would you do with it?
<Answer> I will play smart phone games.
강사 첨삭
Hi! [이름] ^_^
This is teacher Grace.
I appreciate that you answered your homework yesterday.
And this is the correction for your composition.
1. I read books, I watch TV,and I play with my friends.
>> I like to read books, watching TV and play with my friends during my free time.
2. I will play smart phone games.
>> If I have more free time, I usually play some games to my smartphone.
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