12/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are some stores that are open 24/7 in Korea.
Most common stores that operates for 24 hours everyday are convenient stores.
Although the prices of items are higher than supermarket, we could buy anything near our places regardless of time.
Some restaurants and cafe are included in 24/7 stores.
I think most of these restaurants sell hangover foods like rice soup.
People who work late in the night or are scheduled to have an exam next day use the 24/7 cafe.
But many 24/7 restaurants and cafe disappear as the operation of stores are limited because of COVID-19.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Dr. [이름]!
As I heard, there are really so many convenient stores in your country. In a news article released this year, most young teenager-male and early-male adults frequently buy in the convenient stores som ramyun and others. Perhaps, it is handy and highly accessible as you have explained.
Well, thank you for your homework answer. I truly appreciate your effort in writing down an answer to my questions always. Below, as you can see, underlined are mostly the insertion and the correct use of the articel \'the\'. Raed then carefully.
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-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Most common stores that operates for 24 hours everyday are convenient stores.
>> The most common stores that operate for 24 hours everyday are the convenient stores.
Although the prices of items are higher than supermarket, we could buy anything near our places regardless of time.
Although the prices of items are higher than supermarket, we could buy anything near our places regardless of time.
>> Although the prices of items are higher than the supermarket, we could buy anything near our places regardless of the time.
Some restaurants and cafe are included in 24/7 stores.
>> Some restaurants and cafes are included in 24/7 stores.
I think most of these restaurants sell hangover foods like rice soup.
>> Correct!
Or: I think most of these restaurants sell hangover food like rice soup.
People who work late in the night or are scheduled to have an exam next day use the 24/7 cafe.
People who work late in the night or are scheduled to have an exam next day use the 24/7 cafe.
>> People who work late at the night or are scheduled to have an exam the next day use the 24/7 cafes.
But many 24/7 restaurants and cafe disappear as the operation of stores are limited because of COVID-19.
>> But many 24/7 restaurants and cafes disappeared as the operation of stores are limited because of COVID-19.
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