12.22 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It's a nice monday. we can enjoy chritsmas day this week.
What do you think is interesting about Korean culture?
One of the interesting Korean culture is food one.Koreans like fermented food such as Doenjang,soy sauce and Kimchi.And they also like very spicy food,but that food are unhealthy for us. So, a lot of Koreans have stomach trouble. But I think that fermented food are more informative than fast food for our health.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
It\'s Christmas season once again so enjoy with your family. Anyway, for your hoemwork, please review my corrections if you have time. Have a great afternoon!~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
It\'s a nice monday.
>> It\'s a nice Monday.
we can enjoy chritsmas day this week.>> We can enjoy Christmas day this week.What do you think is interesting about Korean culture?One of the interesting Korean culture is food one.
>> One interesting about Korean culture is food.
Koreans like fermented food such as Doenjang,soy sauce and Kimchi.
>> Koreans like fermented foods such as Doenjang, soy sauce and Kimchi.
And they also like very spicy food, but that food are unhealthy for us.
>> And they also like very spicy foods, but that they are unhealthy.
So, a lot of Koreans have stomach trouble.
>> So, a lot of Koreans have stomach diseases.
But I think that fermented food are more informative than fast food for our health. >> But I think that fermented food is healthier than fast food. Thank you!
>> Correct.
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