12/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What was the best things that you are most thankful for this year? Why?
<Answer>
1.My birthday party.Because I invited many friends.
2.Christmas!!Because I recived many gifts.
3.Smart phone.My parents gave me a very nice phone.
강사 첨삭
What was the best things that you are most thankful for this year? Why?
< Answer>
1.My birthday party.Because I invited many friends.
>> The best thing I am most thankful for this year is my birthday party because I invited many friends.
2.Christmas!!Because I recived many gifts.
>> I\'m also thankful for Christmas because I received many gifts.
3.Smart phone.My parents gave me a very nice phone.
>> Another one is my smart phone. My parents gave me a very nice phone.
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