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2013-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Good day! T.Alice~!! It's Thursday. And it will be a great day because tommorrow is a holiday for me. And I will have dinner with my team members today for celerbrating our last 2013. I am going to watch a movie in the theater when you call me. But I will answer your call. Haha. I appreciated your tips on Monday and I thought that would be very useful. So I will adopt your tips to my life. What I am saping is that I will exercise as your good guide. Honestly, I had a book that explains using methods about several situation. The movie will be finished at 22:30 LT. I can't help but take a last train in Pusan. Then I will arrive at Seoul station at 04:30LT tommorrow morning. As I said before, it is a long trip.. ㅜㅜ;; Haha. I registered TOEIC on Feb. 08th next year so I am doing my best for it and will do continously. See you !

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Hi there^^ Just a day after Christmas day and tomorrow, it will be your day off again, like you mentioned. That\'s awesome! Oh no! You\'ll be taking my call while you watch the movie? Isn\'t it a good idea? Haha! Thanks anyway! :) I\'m glad to hear you have finally registered for TOEIC. Let\'s work it out together starting today. Catch you later Sir [이름]! ~Teacher Alice Good day! T.Alice~!! >> Good day, Teacher Alice!It\'s Thursday. >>CORRECT^^ And it will be a great day because tommorrow is a holiday for me. >>And it\'s a great day because tomorrow is a holiday for me. >>And it\'s a great day because tomorrow will be my day off.And I will have dinner with my team members today for celerbrating our last 2013. >> And we will be having a team dinner today to celebrate the end of 2013. >> And we will be having a year end party dinner today. I am going to watch a movie in the theater when you call me. But I will answer yourcall. Haha. >> I will be watching a movie in the theater during our class time but I will still answer your call. Haha! >> OR I will be inside the movie theater during our class time but I will still receive your call.I appreciated your tips on Monday and I thought that would be very useful. >>I appreciate your tips last Monday and I thought that would be very useful.So I will adopt your tips to my life. What I am saping is that I will exercise as yourgood guide. >>So, I will apply your tips in my life. What I am saying is that I will try my best under your good guidance.^^Honestly, I had a book that explains using methods about several situation. >>Honestly, I had a book about the usage of different methods in several situations.The movie will be finished at 22:30 LT. >>CORRECT^^ I can\'t help but take a last train in Pusan. >>I can\'t help but to take the last train in Pusan.Then I will arrive at Seoul station at 04:30LT tommorrow morning. >>Then I will arrive in Seoul station at 4:30LT tomorrow morning.^^As I said before, it is a long trip.. ㅜㅜ;; >>CORRECT^^Haha. I registered TOEIC on Feb. 08th next year so I am doing my best for it and will docontinously. >>Haha. I registered for the TOEIC on February 8th next year, so I will continuously do my best.See you ! >>correct^^

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