12.23 Homework

2014-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! Tell me about an embarrassing experence you had. I had been to Suncheon in korea once for enjoying a festival.There was a garden festival which introduced their garden from many countries.There were crowed with many people. There were a lot of cars in the parking lot,too.After enjoying the festival,I couldn't remember where I parked my car.I lost my parking area.I was suffered from seeking my car.It was so embarrassing experience. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your embarrassing moment without hesitation. Enjoy your day. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning!>> Correct.Tell me about an embarrassing experence you had.I had been to Suncheon in korea once for enjoying a festival. >> I had been to Suncheon in Korea once to enjoy a festival. There was a garden festival which introduced their garden from many countries. >> There was a garden festival which introduced gardens from many countries. There were crowed with many people. >> The place was crowded with people. There were a lot of cars in the parking lot, too. >> Correct. After enjoying the festival, I couldn\'t remember where I parked my car. >> Correct. I lost my parking area. >> I lost my car. I was suffered from seeking my car. >> I had difficulty looking for my car. It was so embarrassing experience.>> It was a very embarrassing experience.Thank you! >> Correct.

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