12.23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning!
Tell me about an embarrassing experence you had.
I had been to Suncheon in korea once for enjoying a festival.There was a garden festival which introduced their garden from many countries.There were crowed with many people. There were a lot of cars in the parking lot,too.After enjoying the festival,I couldn't remember where I parked my car.I lost my parking area.I was suffered from seeking my car.It was so embarrassing experience.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your embarrassing moment without hesitation. Enjoy your day.
Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning!>> Correct.Tell me about an embarrassing experence you had.I had been to Suncheon in korea once for enjoying a festival.
>> I had been to Suncheon in Korea once to enjoy a festival.
There was a garden festival which introduced their garden from many countries.
>> There was a garden festival which introduced gardens from many countries.
There were crowed with many people.
>> The place was crowded with people.
There were a lot of cars in the parking lot, too.
>> Correct.
After enjoying the festival, I couldn\'t remember where I parked my car.
>> Correct.
I lost my parking area.
>> I lost my car.
I was suffered from seeking my car.
>> I had difficulty looking for my car.
It was so embarrassing experience.>> It was a very embarrassing experience.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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