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2017-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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I would like to write about learning to ride a bike. First of all, the most important thing is to not being scared of falling down from a bike. From my experiences, being scared even before sitting on the saddle was my the biggest obstcle to get used to riding a bike. So, I believe being bold and just working a pedal are a key to learning a bike for the first time.

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==Teacher Charlie==



I would like to write about learning to ride a bike. First of all, the most important thing is to not being scared of falling down from a bike. From my experiences, being scared even before sitting on the saddle was my the biggest obstcle to get used to riding a bike. So, I believe being bold and just working a pedal are a key to learning a bike for the first time.

>> I would like to write about learning how to ride a bike. The first and most important thing is to not be afraid of falling down from the bike. This is important because, speaking from personal experience, being scared even before getting on the saddle would be the biggest obstacle on learning how to ride a bike. I believe being bold and just working the pedals are the key points in learning how to ride a bicycle.

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