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2014-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Hi there Teacher Alice. It's a holiday today. I didn't realize until I canceled my lesson yesterday. I was hoping to answer your call, but my friend would have dinner with me. So I should postponed my lesson. I already commuted and was in front of my computer. Wow, you have a long holiday again. I am wondering what you do this holiday. I will go to my wife's house today after working. It's really the tight(or tough) schedule to me. However, I can endure this schedule because of my baby and my wife as you know. Hahaha.. 1. I _saw_ an interesting program about artificial intelligence on PBS last week. 2. Several students _brought_ laptops to class yesterday. 3. My father _drove_ to Los Angeles last weekend. 4. Who _ran_ for President in the last election? 5. John Steinbeck _wrote_ about the problems of migrant workers during the Depression. If there is not any special thing, I will be heading out to go to the famous park near our house. See u on Thursday.

강사 첨삭

Happy New Year!

Thank you for not forgetting to do your homework.

You did a great a job!^^

I do have some corrections in your essay so I hope you consider them.

I wish you all the best this new year.

Hi there Teacher Alice.

>>correct

It\'s a holiday today.

>>correct

I didn\'t realize until I canceled my lesson yesterday.

>>correct

I was hoping to answer your call, but my friend would have dinner with me.

>>I was hoping to answer your call, but my friend wanted to have dinner with me.

So I should postponed my lesson.

>>So I should postpone my lesson.

I already commuted and was in front of my computer.

>>But I was ready and was in front of my computer.

Wow, you have a long holiday again.

>>correct

I am wondering what you do this holiday.

>>I am wondering what you are doing this holiday.

I will go to my wife\'s house today after working.

>>I will go to my wife\'s parent\'s house after work today.

It\'s really the tight(or tough) schedule to me.

>>It\'s really a tight or tough schedule for me.

However, I can endure this schedule because of my baby and my wife as you know. Hahaha..

>>correct

1. I _saw_ an interesting program about artificial intelligence on PBS last week.

>> correct

2. Several students _brought_ laptops to class yesterday.

>> correct

3. My father _drove_ to Los Angeles last weekend.

>> correct

4. Who _ran_ for President in the last election?

>> correct

5. John Steinbeck _wrote_ about the problems of migrant workers during the Depression.

>> correct

If there is not any special thing, I will be heading out to go to the famous park near our house.

>> If there is nothing special, I will be heading out to to the famous park near our house.

See u on Thursday.

>>See you on Thursday.

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