12/26
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy New Year!
Thank you for not forgetting to do your homework.
You did a great a job!^^
I do have some corrections in your essay so I hope you consider them.
I wish you all the best this new year.
Hi there Teacher Alice.
>>correct
It\'s a holiday today.
>>correct
I didn\'t realize until I canceled my lesson yesterday.
>>correct
I was hoping to answer your call, but my friend would have dinner with me.
>>I was hoping to answer your call, but my friend wanted to have dinner with me.
So I should postponed my lesson.
>>So I should postpone my lesson.
I already commuted and was in front of my computer.
>>But I was ready and was in front of my computer.
Wow, you have a long holiday again.
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I am wondering what you do this holiday.
>>I am wondering what you are doing this holiday.
I will go to my wife\'s house today after working.
>>I will go to my wife\'s parent\'s house after work today.
It\'s really the tight(or tough) schedule to me.
>>It\'s really a tight or tough schedule for me.
However, I can endure this schedule because of my baby and my wife as you know. Hahaha..
>>correct
1. I _saw_ an interesting program about artificial intelligence on PBS last week.
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2. Several students _brought_ laptops to class yesterday.
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correct
3. My father _drove_ to Los Angeles last weekend.
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correct
4. Who _ran_ for President in the last election?
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correct
5. John Steinbeck _wrote_ about the problems of migrant workers during the Depression.
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If there is not any special thing, I will be heading out to go to the famous park near our house.
>> If there is nothing special, I will be heading out to to the famous park near our house.
See u on Thursday.
>>See you on Thursday.
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