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2018-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> What do you prefer, to eat everything you like, drink a lot, smoke, have no physical exercise and die at the age of 60 or lead a healthy life and live until 100? Why? Socrates said that he would be hungry Socrates rather than a full pig, but my thoughts are completely different. I think that the life of a full pig is better than hungry Socrates. In addition, in Korea, there is a famous saying which is beloved by numbers, 'If I quit having meats than I can live more than now but there is no meaning to live.' When I heard that first time, I clapped my hands with ardor because his though was exactly same as mine. I guess you already know what I will say before you ask and yes, my answer is of course I prefer the former one perfectly.

강사 첨삭


Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.

 


Cheers!
Jean 




   

>> What do you prefer, to eat everything you like, drink a lot, smoke, have no physical exercise and die at the age of 60 or lead a healthy life and live until 100? Why?



Socrates said that he would be hungry Socrates rather than a full pig, but my thoughts are completely different. 

>> Socrates said that he would rather be a hungry Socrates than a full pig, but my thoughts are completely different.


 I think that the life of a full pig is better than hungry Socrates.

>> From a personal perspective the life of a full pig is better than a hungry Socrates.

 In addition, in Korea, there is a famous saying which is beloved by numbers, \'If I quit having meats than I can live more than now but there is no meaning to live.\'

>> Moreover, there is a famous adage in Korea, which is well-liked by people, “If I quit to eat meat then I could live longer but there is no meaning to life.”


When I heard that first time, I clapped my hands with ardor because his though was exactly same as mine.

>> When I heard that for the first time, I clapped my hands with ardor because his thoughts were exactly the same as mine.

 I guess you already know what I will say before you ask and yes, my answer is of course I prefer the former one perfectly.

>> I think you can easily guess my answer to your question, and yes, I prefer the former.



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