12/26 homework
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I haven\'t seen a casanova among my friends.
However, I often see characters that looks like a playboy in several movies.
I think that some men who likes dating with a few girl friends simultaneously and is always with many girls could be referred as a casanova.
These men are usually depicted as attratctive, kind and fluent.
So, lots of women near a casanova get confused that he likes them very much, but sadly he acts like that to every women.
The fate of a casanova in most movies is that after he find a real love and fall in love with her, he stops to act like a playboy.
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Good day, Dr. [이름]!
It is great to know that there is no casanova around you. However, as you have seen on movies and tv, a casanova has a chance to change overtime when his true love is found. In reality, some casanovas never change. ^^
Well, your ideas and sentences are very well organized, well done! My grammar suggestions are some addtion of preposition, some deletion of words, and the subject-verb agreement. Study them carefully below.
Thank you for your very active participation in class today!
See you again soon!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
However, I often see characters that looks like a playboy in several movies.
>> However, I often see characters who look like a playboy in several movies.
I think that some men who likes dating with a few girl friends simultaneously and is always with many girls could be referred as a casanova.
>> I think that some men who like dating a few girl friends simultaneously and is always with many girls could be referred to as casanova.
These men are usually depicted as attratctive, kind and fluent.
>> Correct!
Or: These men are usually depicted as attratctive, kind, and fluent.
So, lots of women near a casanova get confused that he likes them very much, but sadly he acts like that to every women.
>> Correct!
The fate of a casanova in most movies is that after he find a real love and fall in love with her, he stops to act like a playboy.
>> The fate of a casanova in most movies is that after he finds a real love and falls in love with a woman, he stops to act like a playboy.
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