12.26 Homework

2014-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! It's a nice day because we can enjoy this weekend.Have a good time. Do you think that pieces of history are significant in understanding our past better? Yes. I think that pieces of history are significant in understanding our past better. We can get a lot of lessons with a history. There is a well-known proverb in Korea that says,"review the old and learn the new".This means that in order to creat new things,we should think about pieces of history is more important. Thank you! Have a great weekend!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your insight about the importance of history. Anyway, have a great weekend too. Enjoy your time. ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! It\'s a nice day because we can enjoy this weekend.Have a good time.>> Correct.Do you think that pieces of history are significant in understanding our past better?Yes. I think that pieces of history are significant in understanding our past better. >> Correct.We can get a lot of lessons with a history. >> We can learn a lot of lessons from the past. There is a well-known proverb in Korea that says,\"review the old and learn the new\". >> Correct.This means that in order to creat new things,we should think about pieces of history is more important.>> This means that in order to creat new things, we should think that pieces of history are important.Thank you! Have a great weekend! >> Correct.

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