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>> What activity have you remained interested in over the past years?
Let me see, i don\'t have big interesing activities however, playing electronic game in video arcade was the most intesting things i ever had. I went to there in almost 8 or 10 years. I wan\'t interested in going to the video arcade or computer room called PC Bang. With my acadamy classmates, after dinner we went to the video arcade in order to releasing our stress and having fun. There are many types of electronic game machines and one of them, i chose the fighting game with two players. I did for a first time in case of this kind of game but i did a good job. I won the games continuously and set a new record. I found my new talent about game. I was greatful because i got compliment from my friends. I am going to visit there soon.
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>> What activity have you remained interested in over the past years?
Let me see, i don\'t have big interesing activities however, playing electronic game in video arcade was the most intesting things i ever had.
>> Let me see, I\'m not interested in any major activities, however, playing electronic games at video arcades was the most interesting thing I\'ve ever done.
I went to there in almost 8 or 10 years.
>> I\'ve been going there for almost 8 or 10 years now.
I wan\'t interested in going to the video arcade or computer room called PC Bang.
>> correct
With my acadamy classmates, after dinner we went to the video arcade in order to releasing our stress and having fun.
>> To release our stress and have fun, I went to the video arcade with my academy classmates after dinner.
There are many types of electronic game machines and one of them, i chose the fighting game with two players.
>> There are many types of electronic game machines and one of them is the fighting game with two players, which I chose.
I did for a first time in case of this kind of game but i did a good job.
>> The first time I tried it, I actually did a good job.
I won the games continuously and set a new record.
>> correct
I found my new talent about game.
>> I discovered that I\'m pretty talented in games.
I was greatful because i got compliment from my friends.
>> I was grateful because I received compliments from my friends.
I am going to visit there soon.
>> correct
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