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2013-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi there T.Alice!! How was your last Friday of this year? I had a good time with my family. At that time, I was hoping to have dinner at the wonderful restraurant. I didn't do that because we should go to the hospital for my baby and my wife. However, we really enjoyed lunch at Chinese cafeteria. Oh my god!! I should get out of my office now.. See you !

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! I had a good time last Friday. Haha, though there\'s really nothing special. Happy new year! ^^ Catch you later! ~Teacher Alice Hi there T.Alice!! >> Correct! >> Hi there Teacher Alice! How was your last Friday of this year? >> Correct! I had a good time with my family. >> Correct! At that time, I was hoping to have dinner at the wonderful restraurant.>> At that time, I was hoping to have dinner at a wonderful restaurant. I didn\'t do that because we should go to the hospital for my baby and my wife. >> Correct! However, we really enjoyed lunch at Chinese cafeteria. >> However, we realy enjoyed lunch at a Chinese cafeteria. Oh my god!! >> Correct!I should get out of my office now.. See you ! >> Correct!

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