12/27
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there T.Alice!!
How was your last Friday of this year?
I had a good time with my family.
At that time, I was hoping to have dinner at the wonderful restraurant.
I didn't do that because we should go to the hospital for my baby and my wife.
However, we really enjoyed lunch at Chinese cafeteria.
Oh my god!!
I should get out of my office now.. See you !
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
I had a good time last Friday. Haha, though there\'s really nothing special.
Happy new year! ^^
Catch you later!
~Teacher Alice
Hi there T.Alice!!
>> Correct!
>> Hi there Teacher Alice! How was your last Friday of this year?
>> Correct! I had a good time with my family.
>> Correct! At that time, I was hoping to have dinner at the wonderful restraurant.>> At that time, I was hoping to have dinner at a wonderful restaurant.
I didn\'t do that because we should go to the hospital for my baby and my wife.
>> Correct! However, we really enjoyed lunch at Chinese cafeteria.
>> However, we realy enjoyed lunch at a Chinese cafeteria. Oh my god!!
>> Correct!I should get out of my office now.. See you !
>> Correct!
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