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2019-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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I am a very improvised person. So, sometimes I become very sad or upset with someone\'s words and it often makes me can not think rationally. In most cases, I regret my emotion changes after a while. So, I respect a person who is always calm and relaxed. That kind of person has the same look always like a poker face. The face looks not so much happy, but not angry. So, I can not guess her/his mind. At that time, I just focus on the their words what they say. I think it is just a fact without any inaccurate assumption. I really respect this characteristic. Many people are easily read my emotions and feeling. This is good for friends or family because I can give them my love or happiness as I feel. But, it is not good at work. Especially, I teach a lot of students and I think I have to treat them the same. And when I talk with my boss, sometimes I upset but I don\'t want to show my feeling. A person like me looks human sometimes but sometimes looks stupid.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you fro this well written homework. I really appreciate your consistency and effort. Keep it up!  ^^
I totally agree with you, I really admire a person who is calm and knows how to refuse to escalate emotions. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I am a very improvised person.
>>I am a person who likes to improvise. 
So, sometimes I become very sad or upset with someone\'s words and it often makes me can not think rationally.
>>So, sometimes I become very sad or upset with someone\'s words and it often makes me not think rationally.
In most cases, I regret my emotion changes after a while.
>>In most cases, I regret it and my emotion changes after a while.
So, I respect a person who is always calm and relaxed.
>>CORRECT
That kind of person has the same look always like a poker face.
>>That kind of person seems to always have a poker faced look.
The face looks not so much happy, but not angry.
>>CORRECT
So, I can not guess her/his mind.
>>CORRECT
At that time, I just focus on the their words what they say.
>>At that time, I just focus on their words or what they say.
I think it is just a fact without any inaccurate assumption.
>>CORRECT
I really respect this characteristic.
>>CORRECT
>>I really respect this kind of personality/person.
Many people are easily read my emotions and feeling.
>>Many people can easily read my emotions and feelings. 
This is good for friends or family because I can give them my love or happiness as I feel.
>>CORRECT
But, it is not good at work.
>>CORRECT
Especially, I teach a lot of students and I think I have to treat them the same.
>>CORRECT
And when I talk with my boss, sometimes I upset but I don\'t want to show my feeling.
>>And when I talk with my boss, sometimes I\'m upset but I don\'t want to show my feelings.
A person like me looks human sometimes but sometimes looks stupid.
>>CORRECT

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