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2019-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. give a speech 2. didn\'t intend to 3. invited to 4. in charge of 5. ridicule 1. Mr.Anderson had gave wonderful speeches to his students till he passed away. 2. I know that you didn\'t intend to hurt her feeling but you should grow up. 3. Cecile was invited to dinner at nursing home owing to her grandmother-like name. 4. I\'m in charge of this battle from now. 5. He has been ridiculed by the public for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.

 


Cheers!
Jean 


1. give a speech
2. didn\'t intend to
3. invited to
4. in charge of
5. ridicule


1. Mr.Anderson had gave wonderful speeches to his students till he passed away.

>> Mr. [Name] had given inspiring speeches to his students till he passed away.


 2. I know that you didn\'t intend to hurt her feeling but you should grow up.

>> or: I know that you didn\'t mean to hurt her feelings but you should be more mature in handling your emotions.


 3. Cecile was invited to dinner at nursing home owing to her grandmother-like name.

>> Cecile was invited to dinner at a nursing home owing to her grandmother-like name.

 4. I\'m in charge of this battle from now.
>> I\'m in charge of this battle for now.

>> or: I\'m in control of this battle from now on.


5. He has been ridiculed by the public for a long time.

>> correct


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