12/28 (Essay) Did you enjoy school life? What did you like and dislike about it?
학생이 쓴 원문
Since we hadn\'t known about what we did at school, we enrolled school. At school, we can learn about not only academical knowledge but also relationship, music, sports. After the online class has started, I get much time to consider of school life.
When I think about my school life, I can figure out interesting point. Even a satisfaction that I felt during school life is changed and become precious memory, I can\'t enjoy at that time when i\'m in a school. The reason is the pressure that I had to do for the success in the future. Even I\'m a university student which can live less strict life, I always search meaningful activities.
While I experienced online class this year, I got much time comparing offline semester. So, I thank back myself for my happy school life and find out that I did not try to make friends. As a result, I try to join club and meet various people.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sharing your story. I know that it\'s not easy to make friends when you\'re too busy. I am happy to know that you are planning to put yourself out there more. I support you on that. Keep going!~~T.Dee
>>Since we will not know the things we learn in school anywhere else, we enroll in school.
At school, we can learn about not only academical knowledge but also relationship, music, sports.
>>At school, we can learn not only about academic knowledge but also about relationships, music, and sports.
After the online class has started, I get much time to consider of school life.
>>After the online class has started, I get much time to think about my school life.
When I think about my school life, I can figure out interesting point.
When I think about my school life, I can figure out interesting point.
>>When I think about it, I discover some interesting points.
Even a satisfaction that I felt during school life is changed and become precious memory, I can\'t enjoy at that time when i\'m in a school.
>>The good experiences I had are gone but they become precious memories. Now, I can no longer have the same experience like when I used to in school.
The reason is the pressure that I had to do for the success in the future.
>>The reason is the pressure that I had to go through for my success in the future.
Even I\'m a university student which can live less strict life, I always search meaningful activities.
>>Even when I\'m already a university student, which is less stressful, I still always search for meaningful activities.
While I experienced online class this year, I got much time comparing offline semester.
While I experienced online class this year, I got much time comparing offline semester.
>>While experiencing online classes this year, I got much time comparing it with offline classes.
So, I thank back myself for my happy school life and find out that I did not try to make friends.
>>So, I reflect about my happy school life and I found out that I did not try to make friends.
As a result, I try to join club and meet various people.
>>As a result, I plan to try to join clubs and meet various people more.
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