12/28 homework
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Q: The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance. Why do people do operations to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
A: A lot of people have physical complex. There\'s only a certain amount of difference. If they can feel confidence through plastic surgery , it will be change to positive. Somtimes, it can make positve one\'s character. beatiful apperance is human\'s instinct.
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A: A lot of people have physical complex.
>>> CORRECT
There\'s only a certain amount of difference.
>>> CORRECT
If they can feel confidence through plastic surgery , it will be change to positive.
>>> If they can be confident through plastic surgery , it will give them positive effect.
Somtimes, it can make positive one\'s character. beatiful apperance is human\'s instinct.
>>> Sometimes, it can make one\'s character positive. Beautiful appearance is human\'s instinct.
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