12. 29 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question: What was the most interesting place you have ever visited?
I have visited in Taiwan. In Taiwan, there is a very beautiful island. My Korean 4 friends including me rode on a scooter for 4 people and looked around all the island. The weather was warm and the trees are so high and special. I felt so good and I can not help remembering so lively.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]!!:)
How are you doing today?
Happy, happy New year.
I hope that you are doing fine over there. Very good in doing your homework.
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~ T. Lorna^-^
I have visited in Taiwan.
>> I have visited Taiwan.
In Taiwan, there is a very beautiful island.
>> Correct!
My Korean 4 friends including me rode on a scooter for 4 people and looked around all the island.
>> I and my four Korean friends rode a scooter and went island hopping.
The weather was warm and the trees are so high and special.
>> The weather was warm and the trees were so tall and beautiful.
I felt so good and I can not help remembering so lively.
>> I felt so good during that time and I feel happy when I remember that moment.
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