12.2Homework

2013-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Ma'am! Good afternoon! I appreciate your excessive compliment.I am sure it is thanks to your teaching. Anyway I owe you so much. Many thanks! I made a mistake this morning.I can attend in our class tomorrow morning.After our class,I will leave my trip.but I can't report my composition to you. Homework Do you think standard of living is more imfortant than quality of life? No,I don't think so. I think standard of living and quality of life are the same thing. I always pursue better quality of life. so I have been studing English very hard. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir! Thank you for those nice words. I am flattered. I\'m also grateful to have a student like you - very diligent and patient in studying English.

~t. KELLY~

Hi Ma\'am! Good afternoon!

>> Correct.
 I appreciate your excessive compliment.

>> Correct.

I am sure it is thanks to your teaching.
>> I am thankful for your teaching.

Anyway I owe you so much. Many thanks!

>> Correct.
I made a mistake this morning.

>> Correct.

I can attend in our class tomorrow morning.

>> Correct.
>> OR: I can attend our class tomorrow morning.

After our class, I will leave my trip.

>> After our class, I am going to have a trip.

but I can\'t report my composition to you.
>> So  I can\'t submit my composition.
Homework

Do you think standard of living is more important than quality of life?
No, I don\'t think so.

>> Correct.

I think standard of living and quality of life are the same thing.

>> I think standard of living and quality of life are the same.

I always pursue better quality of life.
>>
I always pursue a better quality of life.

so I have been studying English very hard.
>> Correct.
Thank you!

>> Correct.

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