12.2Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Sir! Thank you for those nice words. I am flattered. I\'m also grateful to have a student like you - very diligent and patient in studying English.
~t. KELLY~
Hi Ma\'am! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
I appreciate your excessive compliment.
>> Correct.
I am sure it is thanks to your teaching.
>> I am thankful for your teaching.
Anyway I owe you so much. Many thanks!
>> Correct.
I made a mistake this morning.
>> Correct.
I can attend in our class tomorrow morning.
>> Correct.
>> OR: I can attend our class tomorrow morning.
After our class, I will leave my trip.
>> After our class, I am going to have a trip.
but I can\'t report my composition to you.
>> So I can\'t submit my composition.
Homework
Do you think standard of living is more important than quality of life?
No, I don\'t think so.
>> Correct.
I think standard of living and quality of life are the same thing.
>> I think standard of living and quality of life are the same.
I always pursue better quality of life.
>> I always pursue a better quality of life.
so I have been studying English very hard.
>> Correct.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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