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2021-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My favorite city is my hometown ‘IKSAN’. Here is so cozy and familiar to me. Beside i don’t need to finding the way in here I don’t believe lucky charms because i think that it is just superstiton. I never had a lucky from it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Your hometown sounds very cozy.

I have the same belief with you. :)

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My favorite city is my hometown ‘IKSAN’.

>> My favorite city is my hometown, \"Iksan\"

Here is so cozy and familiar to me.

>> It is so cozy and comfortable here.

Beside i don’t need to finding the way in here
>> Besides, I don\'t need to get lost in different ways here.

I don’t believe lucky charms because i think that it is just superstiton.

>> I don\'t believe in lucky charms because I think they are just superstitions.

I never had a lucky from it.

>> I never had any luck from it.

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