12/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What do you promise to do in the next 365 days?
A: First of all, I wish my family\'s health. And I will try to apper my love to my kids.
And I promise to myself that study english harder.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]~! It\'s time to set goals this year! Be determined to achieve them! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
First of all, I wish my family\'s health.
>>> First of all, I wish for my family\'s good health.
And I will try to apper my love to my kids.
>>> And I will try to show my love to my kids.
And I promise to myself that study english harder.
And I promise to myself that study english harder.
>>> And I promise myself to study English harder.
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