12/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I have many gatherings with other people.
The most important problem is to decide where we meet.
If I meet with people working near my hospital, it\'s simple to make a decision about the destination.
However, it\'s different in case that someone\'s office are apart from my hospital.
Then, we used to decide the restaurants and cafe halfway.
So, we could spend the similar time to go an appointment place.
Sometimes, I go to the place near friend\'s office and the next time, my friend come to the place near my office.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Doctor [이름]!
Matting halway is on of the negotiation skills that we must be able to make or set among the people we meet because it is veryy useful in saving time. Moreover, it means that we respect other people\'s condition of travel in reaching the agreed place to meet.
Generally, your sentences are correct. My suggestions underlined below contain the proper subject-verb agreement as well as the insertion of the article \'a\'. Thank you so much for the quick submission of your homework today!
See you again in class soon!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
The most important problem is to decide where we meet.
>> Correct!
If I meet with people working near my hospital, it\'s simple to make a decision about the destination.
>> Correct!
However, it\'s different in case that someone\'s office are apart from my hospital.
>>However, it\'s different in case someone\'s office is far (apart/away) from my hospital.
Then, we used to decide the restaurants and cafe halfway.
Then, we used to decide the restaurants and cafe halfway.
>> Then, we can decide on one of the restaurants and cafes halfway.
So, we could spend the similar time to go an appointment place.
So, we could spend the similar time to go an appointment place.
>> Correct!
Or: So we can share a common time together in our meeting place.
Sometimes, I go to the place near friend\'s office and the next time, my friend come to the place near my office.
>> Sometimes, I go to the place near a friend\'s office and the next time, my friend comes to the place near my office.
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