12.30 Homework

2014-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It's the last homework of this year.Thank you! I will remember your efforts. HAPPY NEW YEAR! What do people in your country usually do on holiday? People in Korea used to save money for their future in the past. but nowadays they tend to enjoy spending money for themselves.It comes to [이름] people more often.Most Korean go on a hike,watching movies,go to shopping and go to travel somewhere on holiday. But sometimes I go to the library and study. Thank you! Have a nice holiday!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Mr. [이름]! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!! Thank you for doing your last homework this year. I am really glad I met you this year. You are a very diligent student. I commend you for that. I hope that you will continue to strive harder in improving your skills. Great job this year, Mr. [이름]! See you next year! Anyway, enjoy your time with your family. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! It\'s the last homework of this year.Thank you! >> Correct. I will remember your efforts. HAPPY NEW YEAR!>> Correct.What do people in your country usually do on holiday?People in Korea used to save money for their future in the past. >> In the past, people in Korea used to save money for their future. but nowadays they tend to enjoy spending money for themselves. >> Correct.It comes to [이름] people more often. >> This is very common for [이름] people. Most Korean go on a hike,watching movies,go to shopping and go to travel somewhere on holiday. >> Most Koreans go on a hike, watch movies, go shopping and travel somewhere on holidays. But sometimes I go to the library and study. >> Correct.Thank you! Have a nice holiday! >> Correct.

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