12.3Homework

2013-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi,Ma'am? Good afternoon? Have you enjoying this weekend? I returned to my home late last night.All things are to be well done, and I'm fine. I had suffered just because the plane was delayed by the Shanghai smog. The take off was delayed by 5 hours. It was terrible. Homework What is the biggest change you've made in your life? I have experienced great change after I get married. A loving wife and children are the reason of existence for me. I love my wife and kids very much. I am so happy. Have nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Welcome back.  I was really happy to hear your voice this morning. Anyway, I\'m glad that you are back and safe after the problem which you experienced in Shanghai. Be safe always Sir! ~t. KELLY~ Hi,Ma\'am? >> Correct.Good afternoon? >> Correct. Have you enjoying this weekend? >> Are you enjoying your weekend?I returned to my home late last night. >> Correct. All things are to be well done, and I\'m fine. >> All things went well and I\'m fine. I had suffered just because the plane was delayed by the Shanghai smog. >> My flight was delayed due to smog in Shanghai.The take off was delayed by 5 hours. It was terrible.>> Correct.HomeworkWhat is the biggest change you\'ve made in your life?I have experienced great change after I get married. >> I experienced a great change after I got married.A loving wife and children are the reason of existence for me. >> A loving wife and my children are the reasons of my existence.  I love my wife and kids very much. I am so happy. >> Correct.Have nice weekend! >> Correct.

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