12.3Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Ma'am?
Good afternoon? Have you enjoying this weekend?
I returned to my home late last night.All things are to be well done, and I'm fine. I had suffered just because the plane was delayed by the Shanghai smog.
The take off was delayed by 5 hours. It was terrible.
Homework
What is the biggest change you've made in your life?
I have experienced great change after I get married.
A loving wife and children are the reason of existence for me. I love my wife and kids very much. I am so happy.
Have nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Welcome back. I was really happy to hear your voice this morning. Anyway, I\'m glad that you are back and safe after the problem which you experienced in Shanghai. Be safe always Sir!
~t. KELLY~
Hi,Ma\'am?
>> Correct.Good afternoon?
>> Correct.
Have you enjoying this weekend?
>> Are you enjoying your weekend?I returned to my home late last night.
>> Correct.
All things are to be well done, and I\'m fine.
>> All things went well and I\'m fine.
I had suffered just because the plane was delayed by the Shanghai smog.
>> My flight was delayed due to smog in Shanghai.The take off was delayed by 5 hours. It was terrible.>> Correct.HomeworkWhat is the biggest change you\'ve made in your life?I have experienced great change after I get married.
>> I experienced a great change after I got married.A loving wife and children are the reason of existence for me.
>> A loving wife and my children are the reasons of my existence.
I love my wife and kids very much. I am so happy.
>> Correct.Have nice weekend!
>> Correct.
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