12.4 Homework

2014-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It's cloudy and cold in Changwon.Have a nice Thursday! Describe the best gift/present you have received. The best gift I have received is a very special one. I will love that forever.The gift is an organism. In a way it was a blessing. When I was 34 years old, I received a gift from god,I felt very amazing,I jumped for a while after I received that.It was a pleasure for me beyond description.The present was my son,called Dong hyun. He is my ploud and my dream. I love him very much. Thank you! See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! Children are precious gifts from God. I know how you love your son. He is also a good person. So treasure your gift and be proud of him. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! It\'s cloudy and cold in Changwon.Have a nice Thursday!>> Correct.Describe the best gift/present you have received.The best gift I have received is a very special one. >> Correct.I will love that forever. >> Correct. The gift is an organism. >> That gift is a person. In a way it was a blessing. >> It is a blessing. When I was 34 years old, I received a gift from god, I felt very amazing, I jumped for a while after I received that. >> When I was 34 years old, I received a gift from God. I felt very amazed. I jumped for a while after I received that gift. It was a pleasure for me beyond description. >> Correct. The present was my son,called Dong hyun. >> The present is my son, Dong hyun. He is my ploud and my dream. >> He is my greatest dream. I love him very much. >> Correct.Thank you! See you tomorrow! >> Correct.

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