12.4 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It's cloudy and cold in Changwon.Have a nice Thursday!
Describe the best gift/present you have received.
The best gift I have received is a very special one.
I will love that forever.The gift is an organism. In a way it was a blessing. When I was 34 years old, I received a gift from god,I felt very amazing,I jumped for a while after I received that.It was a pleasure for me beyond description.The present was my son,called Dong hyun. He is my ploud and my dream. I love him very much.
Thank you! See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Children are precious gifts from God. I know how you love your son. He is also a good person. So treasure your gift and be proud of him. Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! It\'s cloudy and cold in Changwon.Have a nice Thursday!>> Correct.Describe the best gift/present you have received.The best gift I have received is a very special one.
>> Correct.I will love that forever.
>> Correct.
The gift is an organism.
>> That gift is a person.
In a way it was a blessing.
>> It is a blessing.
When I was 34 years old, I received a gift from god, I felt very amazing, I jumped for a while after I received that.
>> When I was 34 years old, I received a gift from God. I felt very amazed. I jumped for a while after I received that gift.
It was a pleasure for me beyond description.
>> Correct.
The present was my son,called Dong hyun.
>> The present is my son, Dong hyun.
He is my ploud and my dream.
>> He is my greatest dream.
I love him very much.
>> Correct.Thank you! See you tomorrow!
>> Correct.
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