12/4 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Receiving something is exciting whether it\'s a material or mental thing.
If there is Santa still on earth, I want to receive wisdom and batting eye.
Surely I want to have a lot of money, it is also very important to live a happy life.
But, I know the mental happiness is more important with enough money to not make me unhappy.
I will be 33 years old after one month.
When I was younger in my 20s, I thought I will achieve many things in my 30s.
At that time, people in their thirties look like real adults to me.
But, when I am in my 30s, I am still young but I became an adult in society.
I don\'t know maybe my father and mother also think like this?
So, I want to have wisdom to live correctly and have batting eyes for better direction in my life.
I think that finding my way such as a job or marriage or house is very difficult.
I don\'t know that I am doing well or not almost everytime.
Would my thought is different If I will be the 40s?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending your homework early. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
I am amazed with your thoughts. I can tell that you are really a deep person! ^^ Well, definitely for me I want to receive something material just to make me happy. But on second thoughts, you do have a point! Why not receive wisdom so we will be able to discern what is right for us, that way making decisions would be less difficult! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
If there is Santa still on earth, I want to receive wisdom and batting eye.
If there is Santa still on earth, I want to receive wisdom and batting eye.
>>If there is really a Santa on earth, I want to receive wisdom and keen eyes.
Surely I want to have a lot of money, it is also very important to live a happy life.
Surely I want to have a lot of money, it is also very important to live a happy life.
>>CORRECT
But, I know the mental happiness is more important with enough money to not make me unhappy.
But, I know the mental happiness is more important with enough money to not make me unhappy.
>>But I know that mental happiness is more important and just enough money to make me happy.
I will be 33 years old after one month.
I will be 33 years old after one month.
>>CORRECT
When I was younger in my 20s, I thought I will achieve many things in my 30s.
When I was younger in my 20s, I thought I will achieve many things in my 30s.
>>CORRECT
At that time, people in their thirties look like real adults to me.
At that time, people in their thirties look like real adults to me.
>>CORRECT
But, when I am in my 30s, I am still young but I became an adult in society.
But, when I am in my 30s, I am still young but I became an adult in society.
>>But, when I reached my 30\'s I still felt young but I have to become and act my age in the society.
I don\'t know maybe my father and mother also think like this?
I don\'t know maybe my father and mother also think like this?
>>I don\'t know if this was how my parents think too.
So, I want to have wisdom to live correctly and have batting eyes for better direction in my life.
So, I want to have wisdom to live correctly and have batting eyes for better direction in my life.
>>So, I want to have wisdom to live correctly and to have a keen sense for better direction in my life.
I think that finding my way such as a job or marriage or house is very difficult.
I think that finding my way such as a job or marriage or house is very difficult.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t know that I am doing well or not almost everytime.
I don\'t know that I am doing well or not almost everytime.
>>Almost every time I wonder whether I\'m doing the right thing or not.
Would my thought is different If I will be the 40s?
Would my thought is different If I will be the 40s?
>>I wonder if my thoughts would be different when I reach my 40\'s.
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