12.5 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It's a burning Friday. Do you have any special plans this weekend? I hope you will have a wonderful weekend with your friens.
What role do you think music plays in our life?
I think the influence of music is very powerful. Music gives us a emotional peice in our mind.They also heal our wounded heart. If there isn't music in our life,how ruined our society will be. Nowadays,we can enjoy listening to the music anytime,anywhere with smartphone.we should also feel gratitude about that.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for answering my question. I enjoyed reading your essay. Have a great weekend!~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! It\'s a burning Friday.
>> Correct.
Do you have any special plans this weekend?
I hope you will have a wonderful weekend with your friens.>> I hope you will have a wonderful weekend with your friends.What role do you think music plays in our life?I think the influence of music is very powerful.
>> Correct.
>> or: I think that the influence of music is very powerful.
Music gives us a emotional peice in our mind.
They also heal our wounded heart.
>> Correct.
If there isn\'t music in our life, how ruined our society will be.
>> Correct.
Nowadays, we can enjoy listening to the music anytime,anywhere with smartphone.
>> Nowadays, we can enjoy listening to music anytime, anywhere with a smartphone.
we should also feel gratitude about that.>> We should also feel grateful about that.
>> We shoould express our gratitude about it.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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