12/5 homework
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I used to prefer watching movies than reading books.
But, my taste was changed nowadays.
The movie entertains my eyes and ear, I can feel like I become a protagonist empathically.
The book leads my brain and mind.
I only watch texts and it makes me imagine.
It is very fun.
Sometimes I think what would I do if I was the main character.
I mark the passages I like by index paper.
And I write the passages and my impressions or thoughts in my note after reading the book.
At that time, I feel like I read the book again.
Reading books gives me not only knowledge also a sense of accomplishment that I have done something.
Nowadays, there are so much information and content on the internet, but it becomes more difficult to find real information and helpful knowledge because anyone can post information without verification.
Someone said that when we want to know something new, even if it\'s not a deep book, we can understand the background and the core by reading about five books.
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But, my taste was changed nowadays.
But, my taste was changed nowadays.
>>But, my taste has changed nowadays.
The movie entertains my eyes and ear, I can feel like I become a protagonist empathically.
The movie entertains my eyes and ear, I can feel like I become a protagonist empathically.
>>The movie entertains my eyes and ears, I can feel emphatically as a protagonist.
The book leads my brain and mind.
The book leads my brain and mind.
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I only watch texts and it makes me imagine.
I only watch texts and it makes me imagine.
>>I only read texts and it makes me imagine.
It is very fun.
It is very fun.
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Sometimes I think what would I do if I was the main character.
Sometimes I think what would I do if I was the main character.
>>Sometimes, I think what I would do if I am the main character.
I mark the passages I like by index paper.
I mark the passages I like by index paper.
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And I write the passages and my impressions or thoughts in my note after reading the book.
And I write the passages and my impressions or thoughts in my note after reading the book.
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At that time, I feel like I read the book again.
At that time, I feel like I read the book again.
>>CORRECT
Reading books gives me not only knowledge also a sense of accomplishment that I have done something.
Reading books gives me not only knowledge also a sense of accomplishment that I have done something.
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Nowadays, there are so much information and content on the internet, but it becomes more difficult to find real information and helpful knowledge because anyone can post information without verification.
Nowadays, there are so much information and content on the internet, but it becomes more difficult to find real information and helpful knowledge because anyone can post information without verification.
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Someone said that when we want to know something new, even if it\'s not a deep book, we can understand the background and the core by reading about five books.
Someone said that when we want to know something new, even if it\'s not a deep book, we can understand the background and the core by reading about five books.
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