12/5 lesson 3 My neighborhood

[essay] My neighborhood is located in beside my company. The best part about living in this neighborhood is that there are many coworkers and my friends. Another good thing is that it is very close to go to a office. This is where people can stay as dormitory beside the company. However, the area lacks traffic and some amenities so I guess some people find it inconvenient. Despite some disadvantages, I think my neighborhood is a nice place to live. [homework] 1) Sandra and Angela haven't met each other for a long time. 2) My friends enjoyed himself very much at the concert. 3) Tim repaired his car himself. 4) We helped ourselves with our report. 5) People often give each other presents at Christmas.

Hello there Sir [이름]! You have very minimal corrections here on your essay. So make sure to identify them in these suggestions. So here they are. Thanks for this. -T. Donna My neighborhood is located in beside my company. >> My neighborhood is located in beside my company. The best part about living in this neighborhood is that there are many coworkers and my friends. >> The best part about living in this neighborhood is that there are many coworkers and friends. Another good thing is that it is very close to go to a office. >> Correct! This is where people can stay as dormitory beside the company. >> This is where people can stay at the dormitory beside the company. However, the area lacks traffic and some amenities so I guess some people find it inconvenient. >> Correct!  Despite some disadvantages, I think my neighborhood is a nice place to live. >> Correct!1) Sandra and Angela haven\'t met each other for a long time. >> Correct!2) My friends enjoyed himself very much at the concert. >> My friends enjoyed themselves very much at the concert.3) Tim repaired his car himself. >> Correct!4) We helped ourselves with our report. >> Correct!5) People often give each other presents at Christmas. >> Correct!