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2022-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I am planning to participate in many invitations and greetings for the end of the year. Because of COVID19, I rarely have greetings with other people during recent 2 years. But, as the situation is better, it\'s possible to have a gathering without a limit. So, I receive many invitations for the party. Several greetings with alumni and coworkers are scheduled. Also, I will meet my friends celebrating christmas and the end of the year. It is interesting to have these various greetings with other people, and talk about their different life.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Dr. [이름]!

I am excited for you and all of your friends and colleagues to meet once again on parties, events, gatherings, among others since doctors really need to participare and enhance their network of people. These events are going to be a blast this year because we have not attended a lot for the past two years. Then, prepare your clothes and shoes to hit the parties!

My general comment is the use of \'greetings\' as a noun. This word can be repplaced by \'occasion, gathering, events, or meet up\' since greetings means \'hi, hello, good morning, good day\'. Then study the sentences below carefully. Thank you for your time and hardwork as always.

See you in class tomorrow!

-T. Donna~

I am planning to participate in many invitations and greetings for the end of the year.

>> Correct!

Or: I am planning to participate in many invitations and (occasions/ gatherings/events) at the end of the year.

Because of COVID19, I rarely have greetings with other people during recent 2 years.

>> Because of COVID19, I rarely have greetings with other people during the recent 2 years.

Or: Because of COVID19, I rarely had (occasions/ gatherings/events) with other people during the recent 2 years.

But, as the situation is better, it\'s possible to have a gathering without a limit.

>> Correct!

So, I receive many invitations for the party.

>> So, I receive many invitations for parties.

Several greetings with alumni and coworkers are scheduled.

>> Correct!

Or: Several meet ups with our alumni and coworkers are scheduled.

Also, I will meet my friends celebrating christmas and the end of the year.

>> Correct!
Or: Also, I will meet my friends to celebrate Christmas and the end of the year.

It is interesting to have these various greetings with other people, and talk about their different life.

>> It is interesting to have these various gatherings with other people, and talk about their lives.

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