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I first used the internet about 10 years ago.
I could learn how to use the internet in my office.
I like using the internet.
I think using the internet is very convenient.
Sometimes while I work, I need a lot of information.
When I need some information, I use the internet.
While I work in my office, I often use it.
Also I shop online.
While I shop online,I can save my time and my money.
However, we must be careful when we use the internet because we can get wrong information.
강사 첨삭
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I first used the internet about 10 years ago.
>>>CORRECTI could learn how to use the internet in my office.
>>>CORRECT
I like using the internet.
>>>CORRECT
I think using the internet is very convenient.
>>>CORRECT
Sometimes while I work, I need a lot of information.
>>>CORRECT
When I need some information, I use the internet.
>>>CORRECT
While I work in my office, I often use it.
>>>CORRECT
Also I shop online.
>>>CORRECT
While I shop online,I can save my time and my money.
>>>CORRECT
However, we must be careful when we use the internet because we can get wrong information.
>>>CORRECT
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