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학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have enough free time during weekdays?
Yes, i have enough free during weekdays.
When do you have free time?
Always^^
How do you spend your free time?
Use smart phone...^^
Who do you spend your free time with?
My sister!
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Hey! You have been very lucky to have a lot of free time. kikiki I envy you.. huhu.. Anyways, good job in your sentence construction here! Great job!
Do you have enough free time during weekdays?Yes, i have enough free during weekdays.>>> CORRECT.
When do you have free time?Always^^>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I always have free time!
How do you spend your free time?Use smart phone...^^>>> I usually use my smart phone when I have free time.
Who do you spend your free time with?My sister!
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I spend my free time with my sister. She\'s wonderful!
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