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2016-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Is it better to stay at home on holidays but I have to go somewhere on holidays for my children. I really like staying at home alone. My children like going somewhere with my husband and me. However my husband usually goes to his office or goes to play tennis on holidays. He really likes playing tennis.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

Wow, this is perfect! You did an amazing job today on your homework. I guess, when you a are a mom, you have to do a lot of things even if you don\'t like them for the sake of your children. Well, your daughters should show more appreciation for the things you do for them. Have a nice day. See you!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Is it better to stay at home on holidays but I have to go somewhere on holidays for my children.

>> correct!
I really like staying at home alone.

>> correct!
My children like going somewhere with my husband and me.

>> correct!
However, my husband usually goes to his office or goes to play tennis on holidays.

>> correct!
He really likes playing tennis.

>> correct!

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