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2016-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

"Keep your friends close and your enemies closer." I agreed. If you have an enemy, you have to close with them instead of fighting with them. And than you have to watch them carefully and figure out what they are planning. However, it is very sad. In our life, we have many enemy and we don't know enemy.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Sometimes no matter how we would like to be friends with everybody, we cannot avoid having people around us who we don\'t get along well. I guess then we could apply this saying. Job well done, Ms. [이름]! See you later.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

\"Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.\"
>> correct!
I agreed.

>> I agree.
If you have an enemy, you have to close with them instead of fighting with them.
>>If you have an enemy, you have to be close to them instead of fighting with them.

And than you have to watch them carefully and figure out what they are planning.
>> correct!

However, it is very sad.

>> correct!
In our life, we have many enemy and we don\'t know enemy.

>> In our lives, we have many enemies and we don\'t know who are our enemies.

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