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학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, most people get experience as they get older.
This experience are consideration, love etc.
However nowadays some people don't have it despite older.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Well, they say people grow with age. We are suppose to mature and grow wiser. But, you are right. Some people don\'t!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, most people get experience as they get older.
>> correct!This experience are consideration, love etc.
>> correct!However nowadays some people don\'t have it despite older.
>> However, nowadasy some people don\'t have it despite their old age.
OR>> However some people don\'t have it despite their age.
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