12/7 homework

2015-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

But do you think they should be given the same punishment as the adults? ->If a teenager commits a crime in Korea, they have a lighter punishment. I think they should be given the same punishment as the adults depends on crime like a psychopath. Instructions: For each sentence, change the adjective in parentheses into an adverb. 1. The ballerina moved around very __graceful_____ (graceful). 2. David __easily_______ (easy) won the first race. 3. I don't know _exactly____ (exact) how much money he makes. 4. I __honestly_______ (honest) don't know what [이름] told his sister. 5. The singer of the band sang very _bad___ (bad) during the concert.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mr. [이름]!

Teenagers are so good at reasoning nowadays that if we correct them about their behavior, they immediately respond with a foolish reason.

They are far more rebellious than the previous generation, I think.

And they also get involved in crimes at an early age.

Sometimes, when I think about it, the society scares me.

Thanks for sharing your ideas.

See you tomorrow!

Teacher Anne

If a teenager commits a crime in Korea, they have a lighter punishment.

>> Correct!

I think they should be given the same punishment as the adults depends on crime like a psychopath.

>> I think they should be given the same punishment as the adults depending on their crime, like being a psychopath.
1. The ballerina moved around very __graceful_____ (graceful).
>> gracefully
2. David __easily_______ (easy) won the first race.
>> Correct!
3. I don\'t know _exactly____ (exact) how much money he makes.
>> Correct!
4. I __honestly_______ (honest) don\'t know what [이름] told his sister.
>> Correct!
5. The singer of the band sang very _bad___ (bad) during the concert.

>> badly

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