12/7 Homework
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Hello [이름]! ^^
Notice what I added to your composition. Yes, I did define and describe what Wagyu beef is and what\'s so special about it. You can also add your personal experience with this kind of beef so people would appreciate why your invented sandwich is special.
Anyway, you did a good job and I can\'t wait to talk to you later. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
If I would invent a new kind of sandwich, I would make a Wagyu sandwich.
Wagyu is japanese beef. I will use a high class Wagyu and many vegitables.
I would dredge salts over Wagyu, and grill it. After grill it, I would wrap Wagyu in lettuce like korean BBQ. Finally, I would put this Wagyu wrapped in lecttuce beteween bread.
>> If I could invent a new kind of sandwich, I would call it \"Wagyu\" sandwich. Wagyu meat comes from a group of Japanese breeds revered for an incredibly high level of fat marbling. Where the best Western beef has white streaks running through it, Japanese wagyu is more fat than flesh, a slab of white with a splattering of pink. I would prepare the sandwich using this Japanese beef and vegetable wherein I would sprinkle salt over the meat then grill it. It would then be wrapped in lettuce like Korean BBQ and placed between two slices of bread.
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