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2016-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I agree but we have to do carefuly doing it. Because our children can get streees. In my case, when my children don't keep promise again and again I do violence to them.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
Just like you said, gone are the days of corporal punishment. The children of today could sue their parents for child abuse. So parents should really be careful with disciplining their children. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I agree but we have to do carefuly doing it.
>> I agree but we have to do it carefully.
Because our children can get streees.
>> Because our children could get stress.
In my case, when my children don\'t keep promise again and again I do violence to them.
>> In my case, when my children don\'t keep their promise again and again, I punish them.
OR>> When my children don\'t keep their promise repeatedly, I punish them.

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