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2017-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I don't have expensive personal possessions. I don't need it. I think I live frugally. In case of my friends, they want to have expensive personal possessions and then they are proud of them. I can't understand.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!
We have our own personal taste. Some people are happy with simple but functioning materials. Others aren\'t. Though like you, I don\'t understand people who spend a lot of money for things they can buy at a much cheaper price. I guess, it\'s the brand they are after not the product.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I don\'t have expensive personal possessions. I don\'t need it.
>> correct!
I think I live frugally.
>> correct!
In case of my friends, they want to have expensive personal possessions and then they are proud of them.
>> correct!
OR>> In my friends\' case, they love buying expensive or branded things and they brag about it.
I can\'t understand.
>> I can\'t understand them.

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