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2017-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Women are not easy to compete with men in Korea. I think we are working in Korean men's world. Most men co-workers at smoking area and then they talk about a lot of things about the office's imformations. But most women co-workers enjoy talking about drama, TV show etc in lounge of office. I do not like talking with women co-workers about this subject. So I go to smoking area with my men co-workers to talk despite I do not smoking.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
It must be tough staying in the smoking area since you are a non-smoker. Actually, I\'m not a smoker too so I hate the smell/scent of cigarette.
Take care!(>;<)
~T. Lynn
Women are not easy to compete with men in Korea.
>> It\'s not easy for women to compete with men in Korea.
I think we are working in Korean men\'s world.
>> I think in Korea, we are working in men\'s world.
Most men co-workers at smoking area and then they talk about a lot of things about the office\'s imformations.
>> Most men co-workers at the smoking area talk about a lot of things about the office\'s information.
But most women co-workers enjoy talking about drama, TV show etc in lounge of office.
>> But most women co-workers enjoy talking about dramas, TV shows etc. in the office lounge.
I do not like talking with women co-workers about this subject.
>> correct!
So I go to smoking area with my men co-workers to talk despite I do not smoking.
>> So I go to the smoking area with my men co-workers to talk even if I do not smoke.

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