12.8 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning! We had much snow this morning here in Changwon.I was late for work because of the traffic congestion.
What role do you think the old and mordern buildings play in the society?
I think that the mordern buildings give us much comfort to live,but we can experience the old buildings with its role play.I like the old buildings,but my wife likes mordern ones.
I wonder whether I understood the title sentence you gave me exactly,or not.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sending this homework. be careful and stay warm and dry this winter season. Have a good day. Don\'t forget to review my corrections. See you!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning! We had much snow this morning here in Changwon.
>> Correct.
I was late for work because of the traffic congestion.>> I was late for work because of traffic congestion.
>> I was late for work because of the heavy traffic.What role do you think the old and mordern buildings play in the society?I think that the mordern buildings give us much comfort to live,but we can experience the old buildings with its role play.
>> I think that modern buildings give us much comfort in living, but we old buildings teach us about life in the past.
I like the old buildings, but my wife likes mordern ones.
>> I like old buildings, but my wife prefers the modern ones.I wonder whether I understood the title sentence you gave me exactly,or not.>> I wonder whether I understood the question you gave me exactly or not.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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