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2018-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I can't meet and see my boss. He is always busy and he stays in the head office in Seoul. Let me tell you about my team leader instead. My team leader is a tall and handsome man. I had a bad impression on him. He always play games on the internet or on his smartphone during working hours However, when I have some problems with my co-workers, he always has a solution. I am surprised about that. He tries our work and check on our team's output. I like him these days.

강사 첨삭

I can\'t meet and see my boss.

>> Correct
 He is always busy and he stays in the head office in Seoul. 

>> Correct
 Let me tell you about my team leader instead. 

>> Correct

or

>> So, let me tell you about my team leader instead.
 My team leader is a tall and handsome man. 

>> Correct
 I had a bad impression on him. 

>> Correct
 He always play games on the internet or on his smartphone during working hours

>> Correct
 However, when I have some problems with my co-workers, he always has a solution.

>> Correct
 I am surprised about that.

>> Correct
 He tries our work and check on our team\'s output.

>> Correct
 I like him these days.

>> Correct

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