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I think that study is not for the college. But korea education is only for the college and bery coercive
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Hi No [이름]:)
The students in South Korea are very competitive there\'s no doubt. Although, children have to undergo a lot of things to come this far. They have to scarify a lot of things for education.
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-Teacher EliseI think that study is not for the college.
>> I think that studying shouldn\'t be all about entering a good university.
But korea education is only for the college and bery coercive
>> But South Korea\'s education system is making it to that.
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