12.9 Homework

2013-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good afternoon! It seems likely to rain. Homework How important is tourism to your country? As south korea, the resource poor country's tourism is very important. I think the goverment should develope this industry. All people should treat to tourists everything honestly. Jeju island is the most popular place to travel in korea. I wish korea could be the best place to tour all around the world. Thank you!

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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I wish I could visit your country someday. South Korea is a beautiful country so who knows, someday it would become the most visited country in the world. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day! ~t. KELLY~ Good afternoon! >> Correct.It seems likely to rain.>> It\'s likely to rain.HomeworkHow important is tourism to your country?As south korea, the resource poor country\'s tourism is very important. >> Did you mean: In South Korea, tourism is very important. I think the goverment should develope this industry. >> Correct. (Kindly check your spelling: develop All people should treat to tourists everything honestly. >> All people should treat tourists with honesty. Jeju island is the most popular place to travel in korea. >> Correct. (*** Korea)I wish korea could be the best place to tour all around the world.>> I wish that Korea would be the best place to travel all over the world.Thank you! >> Correct.

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