12.9 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon!
It seems likely to rain.
Homework
How important is tourism to your country?
As south korea, the resource poor country's tourism is very important. I think the goverment should develope this industry. All people should treat to tourists everything honestly. Jeju island is the most popular place to travel in korea.
I wish korea could be the best place to tour all around the world.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I wish I could visit your country someday. South Korea is a beautiful country so who knows, someday it would become the most visited country in the world. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day!
~t. KELLY~
Good afternoon!
>> Correct.It seems likely to rain.>> It\'s likely to rain.HomeworkHow important is tourism to your country?As south korea, the resource poor country\'s tourism is very important.
>> Did you mean: In South Korea, tourism is very important.
I think the goverment should develope this industry.
>> Correct. (Kindly check your spelling: develop
All people should treat to tourists everything honestly.
>> All people should treat tourists with honesty.
Jeju island is the most popular place to travel in korea.
>> Correct. (*** Korea)I wish korea could be the best place to tour all around the world.>> I wish that Korea would be the best place to travel all over the world.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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